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    A Glass of Lemonade, My Idols, and The Time of My Life 2: Critic At The Cook n' Brooke, chapter 5

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    Post by brookesbiggestfan December 7th 2008, 10:13 pm

    "ELIZA!!!!!!"

    I woke up to Brooke screaming my name. I was scared that something was wrong, so I ran downstairs. Brooke and David were seated at the table looking very, very serious.

    Uh-oh.

    "What's wrong?" I asked.

    "The critic's reviews were in the paper this morning," David told me, frowning.

    Oh no.
    Oh no.
    On no.

    I had disappointed Brooke. I knew it. I felt like crying.

    "Can I see them?" I asked quietly.

    "You should, so you can know what went wrong so it never happens again," David told me, in a harsh tone.

    My heart sank. I really had disappointed Brooke. I had disappointed both of them. I took the paper from David.

    "The Cook n' Brooke was one of the best dining experiences I've had in a while," the paper read.

    Excuse me?

    "The waitress, whose name tag said Eliza, was both friendly and professional."

    EXCUSE ME?

    Suddenly, Brooke & David started to laugh.

    "Gotcha!" Brooke laughed. She and David both hugged me.

    "Thank you, Eliza," Brooke said, smiling.

    "You've made us proud," David added.

    That felt REALLY good.
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    Post by Shawna December 7th 2008, 10:25 pm

    Awww, that's so sweet! I can totally picture all of it!

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