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    A Glass of Lemonade, My Idols, and The Time of My Life 2: Critic At The Cook n' Brooke, chapter 2

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    A Glass of Lemonade, My Idols, and The Time of My Life 2: Critic At The Cook n' Brooke, chapter 2 Empty A Glass of Lemonade, My Idols, and The Time of My Life 2: Critic At The Cook n' Brooke, chapter 2

    Post by brookesbiggestfan December 7th 2008, 9:48 pm

    That week was really tense at the Cook n' Brooke. If it got a bad rating, business would fall dramatically. I learned that from Brooke, who spent most of the week pacing nervously.

    Kristy Lee Cook came down with the flu on Wednesday, and Brooke just about had a panic attack.

    "What if he comes TODAY?" Brooke cried. I gave her my iPod and told her to listen to that and calm down while I thought about the situation. I put everyone's name in a bowl again and picked one. I stared at the name on the paper.

    Eliza.

    Oh crap, oh crap, oh crap. There was no turning back now. Now the pressure was on me. I thought of all the bad 'what if's'.

    What if I stuttered when I spoke to the critic?

    What if I accidentally brought him the wrong thing?

    What if I dropped the food or drink on him?

    What if I disappointed Brooke?

    That was the worst 'what if' question ever. I wished I had never thought of that. Then I tried really hard to think of a good 'what if.'

    What if I made Brooke proud?

    That made me feel a littel better.

    "Brooke, I'll wait on the critic," I told her, reluctantly.

    "Eliza, are you sure?" she asked me, "I don't want to put all that pressure on you."

    She was awesome.

    "Yes, I'll do it," I told her, trying to sound confident, "and don't worry, I won't let you down."

    "I never doubt that," Brooke replied, smiling.

    It felt good that Brooke trusted me. I felt like I could wait on that critic without any problems.

    I paced anxiously with Brooke all day. She let me hang out with her in the lounge until the food critic came. I paced and waited all day. The critic never came. I was relieved and I hoped Kristy Lee would be back the next day. As I mentioned before, I was not good under pressure.

    The next day, Kristy Lee was NOT back. I was scared, because Carly told me that critics usually come on Thursdays.

    About ten minutes before noon, the door opened and a man entered dressed in a suit.

    Brooke started hyperventilating.

    "That's him!" she cried, anxiously, "Eliza, that's him!"

    HIM.

    The critic.

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